inproving

i think this work wasnt really good because i wasnt really clear in what i wanted to explain, i thhink that if they give us more time i think it could also get better and i could get a better grade not just a 5. . i think this work could be done better if explaind better the question that mr andrew asqued us because that why my grade get lower, i think that also ot would be better if i inquier a little bit more so it is more clear.